Introduction :
Do you know how many people died from smoking?.Every year hundreds of thousands of people around the world die from dieases caused by smoking. Smoking defined as a bad habit that a person can be addicted to. Most people like to smoke and others addicted to it. However they don’t realize how dangerous smoking is and how it can affect their health. Moreover Smoking is a big serious problem in these days. This essay will discuss two main effects of this important problem and mention two possible solutions.
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Fatima, good introduction with some language errors.
ReplyDelete1) died - T
2) ?. P - you only need one punctuation mark
3) smoking defined as - T
4) others addicted to it - V
5) Moreover Smoking - C
6) in these days - prep