conclusion :
In conclusion, this essay has discussed two main effects of the problem of smoking and given two important solutions. The smoking has two main effects, short and long term effect. Bad behavior is consider as a short term effect, cancer which may lead to death is consider as long term effect. On the other hand the solutions are utilize your time effectively and use some medication to quit smoking. In my opinion, preventing people from smoking is an effective way to lead people to better health which provides them better life.
The partner by John Grisham
16 years ago
Again, good structure, but with language errors.
ReplyDelete1) The smoking has - no 'the'
2) short and long term effect - #
3) is consider - T
4) effect, cancer - P
5) is consider - T
6) on the other hand - WW